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DevilDude909 - November 5, 2008 10:16 PM (GMT)
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Well there they are. The first one I really, really love. In my own opinion, one of the best ones I've made in a long time. The Gundam one I originally made for the battle with Mew, but I scrapped it because I liked the Ichigo one more.

Please tell me what you think of them :D. Well, actually I just care what you think of the first one. I don't care about the Gundam one, so does anyone want it?

Christian - November 6, 2008 12:14 AM (GMT)
I love the first one it looks amazing although imo you should take out that circle it seems in the way snd make the DevilDude909 more readable other than that nice job DD.

Ikarou007 - November 6, 2008 01:17 AM (GMT)
First One: The colors are the best factor about this one. I can say that's your best area right there. I'm not a fan of the overall composition, but it's decent in it's own right. It seems much too conventional, and it isn't organized too well either.

Those clipping masks add a certain sense of flare to it, but the splatters obstruct that, in my opinion. Or in other words, both of those design elements are hurting each other, as well as the tag overall. That's probably just me. Maybe some more balance concerning the splatter brushes would help, such as putting some splatters behind him as well.

While the text as a bit of illegibility to it, I still love it. One of your best uses of text, in my opinion.

To sum it up, it's a great tag. Not your best, and while it may have quite a few flaws in terms of design, none of them severely hurt the appeal of the tag. Nice job, DD. <3

9.1/10

Second One: If I could describe it in one word, it would be "meh". Especially when comparing to your skill level. Texture, and overall concept is pretty original and creative, but it doesn't seem to work very well. There's not enough contrast, so the lighting appears much to drastic than it needs to be.

That text is orgasmic though. If you ever try using an idea like that again, try having the text closer to the focal, and possibly behind the focal, giving some more emphasis to the focal, in addition to some nice depth as a bonus.

While it's meh, it's still pretty good. 8.5/10


DevilDude909 - November 6, 2008 01:25 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Ikarou007 @ Nov 5 2008, 06:17 PM)
First One: The colors are the best factor about this one. I can say that's your best area right there. I'm not a fan of the overall composition, but it's decent in it's own right. It seems much too conventional, and it isn't organized too well either.

Those clipping masks add a certain sense of flare to it, but the splatters obstruct that, in my opinion. Or in other words, both of those design elements are hurting each other, as well as the tag overall. That's probably just me. Maybe some more balance concerning the splatter brushes would help, such as putting some splatters behind him as well.

While the text as a bit of illegibility to it, I still love it. One of your best uses of text, in my opinion.

To sum it up, it's a great tag. Not your best, and while it may have quite a few flaws in terms of design, none of them severely hurt the appeal of the tag. Nice job, DD. <3

9.1/10

Second One: If I could describe it in one word, it would be "meh". Especially when comparing to your skill level. Texture, and overall concept is pretty original and creative, but it doesn't seem to work very well. There's not enough contrast, so the lighting appears much to drastic than it needs to be.

That text is orgasmic though. If you ever try using an idea like that again, try having the text closer to the focal, and possibly behind the focal, giving some more emphasis to the focal, in addition to some nice depth as a bonus.

While it's meh, it's still pretty good. 8.5/10

Thanks a lot iky for the awesome review :3

And I'll try the idea with the text, thanks. *goes to work on other sig*

Ikarou007 - November 6, 2008 01:39 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (DevilDude909 @ Nov 5 2008, 09:25 PM)
QUOTE (Ikarou007 @ Nov 5 2008, 06:17 PM)
First One: The colors are the best factor about this one. I can say that's your best area right there. I'm not a fan of the overall composition, but it's decent in it's own right. It seems much too conventional, and it isn't organized too well either.

Those clipping masks add a certain sense of flare to it, but the splatters obstruct that, in my opinion. Or in other words, both of those design elements are hurting each other, as well as the tag overall. That's probably just me. Maybe some more balance concerning the splatter brushes would help, such as putting some splatters behind him as well.

While the text as a bit of illegibility to it, I still love it. One of your best uses of text, in my opinion.

To sum it up, it's a great tag. Not your best, and while it may have quite a few flaws in terms of design, none of them severely hurt the appeal of the tag. Nice job, DD. <3

9.1/10

Second One: If I could describe it in one word, it would be "meh". Especially when comparing to your skill level. Texture, and overall concept is pretty original and creative, but it doesn't seem to work very well. There's not enough contrast, so the lighting appears much to drastic than it needs to be.

That text is orgasmic though. If you ever try using an idea like that again, try having the text closer to the focal, and possibly behind the focal, giving some more emphasis to the focal, in addition to some nice depth as a bonus.

While it's meh, it's still pretty good. 8.5/10

Thanks a lot iky for the awesome review :3

And I'll try the idea with the text, thanks. *goes to work on other sig*

<3.

Wolf-RS - November 6, 2008 03:48 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Ikarou007 @ Nov 5 2008, 09:17 PM)
First One: The colors are the best factor about this one. I can say that's your best area right there. I'm not a fan of the overall composition, but it's decent in it's own right. It seems much too conventional, and it isn't organized too well either.

Those clipping masks add a certain sense of flare to it, but the splatters obstruct that, in my opinion. Or in other words, both of those design elements are hurting each other, as well as the tag overall. That's probably just me. Maybe some more balance concerning the splatter brushes would help, such as putting some splatters behind him as well.

While the text as a bit of illegibility to it, I still love it. One of your best uses of text, in my opinion.

To sum it up, it's a great tag. Not your best, and while it may have quite a few flaws in terms of design, none of them severely hurt the appeal of the tag. Nice job, DD. <3

9.1/10

Second One: If I could describe it in one word, it would be "meh". Especially when comparing to your skill level. Texture, and overall concept is pretty original and creative, but it doesn't seem to work very well. There's not enough contrast, so the lighting appears much to drastic than it needs to be.

That text is orgasmic though. If you ever try using an idea like that again, try having the text closer to the focal, and possibly behind the focal, giving some more emphasis to the focal, in addition to some nice depth as a bonus.

While it's meh, it's still pretty good. 8.5/10

+5 Rep Points for giving tips and a great review

Demonater - November 6, 2008 08:47 PM (GMT)
Damn DD you never fail! Nuff said...

mew-too - November 10, 2008 06:15 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (DevilDude909 @ Nov 5 2008, 04:16 PM)
user posted image

and...

user posted image

Well there they are. The first one I really, really love. In my own opinion, one of the best ones I've made in a long time. The Gundam one I originally made for the battle with Mew, but I scrapped it because I liked the Ichigo one more.

Please tell me what you think of them :D. Well, actually I just care what you think of the first one. I don't care about the Gundam one, so does anyone want it?

First:
What the hell is with all the random stuff on the whole left? It's just a bunch of nothing and it really hurts the 'look' of the sig. Secondly, why is there a random circle with a line through it? That's a poor attempt at adding last minute flow to a tag IMO. Lastly, I would just cut out the text because wth does 'elemental' have to do with a video game guy scowling?
If you just cut it into the meat part of the sig, and remove that circle stuff, you'll have a nice looking sig.

Good sig to look at when you're high. 6/10

Second:
Another picture to check out when you're high. wth is with that thing? Is that an upside down smiling dinosaur in front of a retarded tractor or what? And what's with the random squiggles? The text would be nice if I could read it. And at least the retarded dinosaurs flow throughout.

Good flow, bad everything else.That sig needs major work. 4.5/10




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